here is the first draft that i have done for my contents page, here i have no text to put in yet and have lots of blank spavces that need to be filled and i need to improve the layout

there is a lot of empty space that should be used
Think about how you could use coverlines in the top right, bottom right, and left third of your image
try and indicate the date and price of your magazine
the readability of some of your fonts – particularly at the bottom of the page
You need to make it extremely clear to customers what your mag's about!