here is the first draft that i have done for my contents page, here i have no text to put in yet and have lots of blank spavces that need to be filled and i need to improve the layout

there is a lot of empty space that should be used
Think about how you could use coverlines in the top right, bottom right, and left third of your image
try and indicate the date and price of your magazine
the readability of some of your fonts – particularly at the bottom of the page
You need to make it extremely clear to customers what your mag's about!

for my magazine i took some pictures and edited them so the go with the style of the magazine, as i am imn the pictures, becaused the band i am using i am part of, i had to set the camera on a times and place it ontop of my bag to get the right angle

this is the link to my evaluation

here are the final designs of my magazine

here are some more images i have taken or have being taken of the band that i didnt end up using for my product

doing reseach into the genre that i have chosen is very importent when i am creating the conventions and making sure to include them. the reason i have linked these videos is because it gives a very clear image of how people dress in this type of music

research into indie magazines

what i found when i was doing research into indie music magazines where that they tend to have dark mysterious pictures on the front, for example in the pictures above.